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not creative world

in a world full of fear, who needs brains?
this butling world leaves no room for those who are creative
for those who are creative are not fearful, are not bashful
creative people, they grow up like me, with no daddy to teach them to be scared
why should i go to this place? where there is no freedom from self
this place has no flowers, no sunshine, no love

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yea idk.. not my best, not my worst

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  • Blood Bloom
    May 18, 2008
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    :-( How sad.....


  • SmartBrick
    May 5, 2008
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    No...It's good.It made scene...Unlike MOST of the poems i have written.