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Fishie In The River

Fishie, fishie in the river,
How I wonder where you
are and why you're so far
even though you don't have a car

Even as the crickets talk,
I sit alone by the water
with my fishing pole hoping
to see you

Wishing I had a friend
I noticed a lost kitty
then gave her milk and
some attentino

Fishie, Fishie in the river
wont you please come to me
so that I take both you and
the kitty home?

Author notes

This poem, isn't exactly in its final format or stage, yet. But it seems like a good start. I might change Fishie in the river to Kitty at the river, at some point. By the way, I'm Mr. Cat

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  • what is this?

    did you enter the wrong contest? This contest was for an AP father/husband - I don't know how this piece comes close to anything about what makes you a good candidate - this makes no sense to me.