The clouds sway
to cover light
to dim the moon
and create more night.
For all the good it does us,
The moon rubs us
in such a way
as to say
"Welcome to the dusking of a new day".
Author notes
OK, not sure if it is too descriptive of the picture. Just what came out when I saw it. :-)
A contest entry
- Forty Words ~ Twenty-four hours by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended May 10, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You kept this rather simple in description as if you feared to step beyond the image offered. It does describe the picture in an obvious fashion. Thanks for entering. Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Its sweet and simple; straight to the point. Not everything has to be so descriptive to get what you see or feel out. Good Job!
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I thought that was rather cute. Nice read!
Vampi
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good
this poem is interesting but in a good way
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