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Goldfish limerick

I once had a fish named Bob.

Blowing bubbles in his jar was his job.

My cat didnt hate him,

And yet,she still ate him.

Im about to break into sobs.

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This is just some random thing i wrote

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  • Chocolate Dime
    December 10, 2008
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    my fish's name is henry, and i would kill my cat if she ate him!!! heh


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 18, 2008

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    I wish I had a fish named bob! THAT'D BE AWESOME!!!!!! :3 haha Awesome poem... short and sweet, and rhymed a bit! cool cool! keep on writing until you can't no more!

    xXDCXx

    ~Make Peace, Not War~


  • Angel13
    July 13, 2008
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    i think u told a story like this before.
    damn that Hannah...lol i love u grlie!


  • crazymomma
    July 9, 2008

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    This is really cute yet sad too. LOL. The imagery created was vivid. I hope it is not a true story in this limerick. Great job!


  • positive anarchy
    May 18, 2008

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    This reminds me of Flavia...*sniffle*

    Adorable little poem, with a quirky twist and excellent rhyming...all that I ask is that you go back and proofread, making Im I'm, and putting a space between your commas, simple stuff like that...

    Overall, good job. Stick on the quirker side...there's so much sad, love-loss type poetry on this site...do something different

    ~Hippie


  • Simply Simple
    May 13, 2008
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    Haha! yay Goldfish! Mine's name is Fred! Hehe. Excellent work. I needed something to laugh at

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