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Sweet

I swallow her 

     buttered kisses
         a juvenescent elixir

flowing freely
from her honeyed haven.






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~ Dripping Temptation ~

Picture: "Leidenschaft" Art Print.
By: Jutta Topfer
Courtesy of: AllPosters.com

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  • Cannonsfire
    May 13, 2008

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    My! What you have done to my imagination with these few words lol...but I'll stay silent I think and just contemplate them Love, C


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    May 8, 2008

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    very nice i loved this it was a very tasty written piece and i simply love this a great deal thanks for entering this

  • dillpickle62
    May 8, 2008

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    Holy!

    What an excellent back ground ! Your words mix well with this. Best of luck with this contest. You've a great talent.


  • mzmikki
    May 7, 2008
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    OOOHWEEE!!! That's amazing!!!


  • ferg silver member
    May 7, 2008
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    Sweet!

    Sultry and sensual words..yes in one word sweet!


  • mythological-mouse
    May 7, 2008

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    Ooh, so very well put. Almost like a haiku I think. Is juvenescent really a word?? Loved "honeyed haven" though.


  • Robin Candor
    May 7, 2008

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    Good luck in the contest. You are braver than I, but it really doesn't matter it will be what it will be. I believe you got the picture right for sure. RC

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