I see the knife,
it went right thru his heart.
I hear a scream down the road,
then i hear a gunshot.
There went two murders.
I looked down and wander,
what have i done?
THen I feel the pain,
and realize there was a third murder,
it was me.
I fall with a bullet thru my heart,
side-by-side im dead with whom i murdered.
Be careful what you do, the same might happen to u!!!
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hotness...
i like this one, coolness kiddo
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mmm, i like, especially the little twist at the end. More importantly, I appreciate the motive and message you are trying to imply to us, that there are things we do in life that can have disasterous consequences and that we should be mindful of this. Thanks for sharing!
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No prob, thanx for the comment. This is one of my favorite poems that I wrote and I have wrote many more that I will eventually get on here.
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