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Role Reversible Versicles - Pro and Con Formity

Poetical forms

should serve, and not be served,
what, deserved, conforms ?


Muse poetical

mocks lock's lined paradox box, shocks

re...role versicle

Poetical rules
should be ingrained then ignored,
only the heart schools

Author notes

Background
http://www.flickr.com/photos/ggarfield/24227110/


pic cherry love bowl
http://www.flickr.com/photos/anua22a/2314461204/

whorls
http://www.flickr.com/photos/anua22a/2320260302/sizes/o/in/photostream/

Peacock's Eye, Tropical Fish, or Butterfly Scale ?
http://www.flickr.com/photos/anua22a/2313947752/in/set-72157600710863506/

pic transcion
http://www.flickr.com/photos/edenfolwell/2304049614/

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Comments

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  • PoesyPeruser
    August 11
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    complex

    Hi~ I enjoyed the visuals as your words flowed around them. The last line is awesome!
    Pp

  • Luckintheshadows
    May 17

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    A very interesting read...For me, the background of swirly dots kind of detracts from your incredible words...but that's just my opinion.

    Thanks for sharing this,

    Luck.

  • frownsnfreckles
    May 6

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    fabulous images again. I tend to agree but whether that is because I am not schooled enough in form or the fact that I always feel a poem has a life of its own with something to say, I'm not sure. Expression and communication is at the heart of poetry yet for them to live on they must have great content or great form to be digested to memory.

    . Rewarded 6


  • I will stand by you
    May 5
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    great
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