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Death or Love?

My life is pathetic
I might as well be dead
I don't want to get out of my own fucking bed
I'v fallen into a pit
I thought I'd never see
And all I do is drag my friends down with me
They try to help me up
But I'm afraid they might find
What I have hidden in my mind
A true dark desire
A love of a certain kind

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  • BrokenSanity
    July 10, 2008

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    i know what that's like. i don't accept help cs it ruins things for everyone hu i care bout. well written.


  • LionessK silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    It's not easy to go through life with thoughts such as these. I hope that if this is a personal piece it is not a feeling that will last. Keep writing, it does help... just to vent sometimes.
    Enjoy the site.


    ~Kristy


  • XxUnforgiven-EmoxX
    May 9, 2008
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    Bleh and such...


  • The-missing-pieces
    May 8, 2008
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    i like the wording of this.