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Hunger # 2

The fire in her eyes
spread to her mouth
as she sated…
her blood lust!

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  • Celtic Legend
    June 26
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    ooh! nice!
    Celtic


  • myorama
    May 15, 2008
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    Fine use of words with an excellent conclusion. Well done.

  • phoenixonfire
    May 8, 2008

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    DARK and very intimate painful! Awesome imagery in very less words! thanks for entering and good luck!
    Pri