I want to hold the days in my arms forever especially the days I spent with you... Unknown
Those times in the park
Those times in the dark
Every single smile
Every single mile
I would love to hold on in style
If only for alittle while
I never want these days to pass
The times we lay upon the grass
All the days we held to love
Through the fights that no one won
Past those door lies someone new
But I just want to be with you
So tell please can we hold on
To what little memories that spawn
A life time of happiness
A life time of sappiness
My love will never fade
Never fall in any shade
A contest entry
- the days I spent with you..... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended May 19, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what you think
Comments
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Well I love the intensity of the write touching the depth of the message..thanks for sharing it with me my friend.,...
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cute
this is really cute

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this is way cute. [:
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Thanx, I wrote it for this contest, I'm sure it's not as great as most things.
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