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telechild

there was a street i used to play on when i was young
i think it felt like petty theft beneath my
pinch me (Adam, Eve and.) feet
that is to say it felt like sanctity as i was a petty thief
i can still remember your Norwegian voice
ringing through the dial tone
and when you sang my name
i remember swallowing the telephone
"ring yourself dry" they told me
so i lay down
and prepared to die.
(That is to say)
i did just as they wanted and i will again.

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  • -foreverandever
    May 21, 2008
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    wow wow

    this was really.. strange to read, especially at ten to two in the morning
    but, good strange
    seems sort of surreal
    sort of laced with irony
    almost as if you're quietly laughing/smiling wryly at something the reader can't quite grasp

    wonderful