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Live Tomorrow

Watching now as it all seemed to pass me by
I begin to think on what even brought me here
But somehow I knew I just never thought on it
You know?
Perhaps if I live it again tomorrow I will know.

Looking out the window
Looking on to the streets
Eyes settling on nothing
Everything perhaps

Who knows what was going on just then,
I couldn't tell you.

This confusion bringing me grief

Watching
Waiting
Falling
And twisting

My room never facing the same way

Lines never making sense

Words jumbled and now my head spins

No rhyme or reason in the syllables
Meter

Just the confusion

So what to do now
Another day passed
And again I go to sleep

Perhaps if I live it again tomorrow I will know.

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  • background music
    May 6, 2008

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    ahhh yes, I think at times we have all felt like this. If only we could live life over... but would we really do things different? Thanks for entering my contest!