When I am with you
The one I love
My one true happiness
The only one I can ever think of
I feel so light, my worries slip away
Nothing can stop the pains I feel but you
You’ve taken them all away
It’s the greatest feeling
I never knew, ‘til I was with you
And when you say “I love you”
It takes my breath away
And all I can do is say:
“I love you too and more everyday”
I gave you all my heart
I know you won’t tear it apart
I can not be happy if I am not with you
And baby I would gladly say “I do”
A contest entry
- only one happiness... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended May 19, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What About Love? by GypsyEyes.
500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aww this is a great piece of writing!!
it expresses alot of emotion in it and i love it its so awesome!
it is soo sweet
keep up the good work
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Aaaawwww hun this is beautiful. So great to read a poem from you expressing your tender, loving side. I hope your true happiness stays with you for always.
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Truely an intimate work of the heart..well done..and my thanks for sharing it...and entering in my contest....
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my better comment -_-
is awww
♥
happiness XD -
ill be back for a better comment
i gots to go run >.<
i ate that apple -_-
& well after that i have to sell adds
shit.. love yous bbl
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