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Two Worlds Apart

A longing to
Not belonging here

Something to see
Never to touch
Sat here alone
For all my life

Fought so long

Trapped in this glass
Always to see your eyes
Never to touch your face

Shunned to disgrace
Pushing me away
If ever we did meet

So in my broken lines
Messages bogged
And alikened to madness

So sorry

Never meant to hurt you

Hands banging against glass
Screaming silent words
Breath not escapes

Cracks

A shatter and we all tumble
Tremble at the touch
Your life too will crumble

I know it should never be
Still I was young and so were you
So we held
And your light went away

We were never meant to be
You so beautiful and high
We all knew where I crawled
Lets leave it there
Where it ended on that day

So sorry

Broken in two us one
Over time we cried
You belonged not here

Left you in the night
Best thing I did
But not for me

Hurting every day
I am glad I did it
Never for me

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  • InMyOwnGlassBox
    May 12, 2008
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    No wonder you won, this is amazing. The way it flowed and how the story continued, Very well done!


  • trinajean
    May 11, 2008
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    Wow! This was amazing! I loved every line!