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Turn up the Music

It's going on 5 o'clock,
My hairs in my face,
Got a stain on my dress,

The school teacher got way out of wack,
I forgot to study for that CWP test,

I need someone close,
Some comfort for sure,

Let's get home real quick,
Turn up the jam!

I'm the type of girl...that turns up the music way loud, just to tune out reality!

Who tries real hard to block the stress,
But when everything's all in a mess,
I can't help but be,

The girl that turns the music way up, just to tune out reality!!

SINGIN' AND DANCIN',

Rihanna -

Come Mr. DJ song pon de replay
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up
All the gyal pon the dancefloor wantin some more what
Come Mr. DJ won't you turn the music up

Hey Mr.
Please Mr. DJ
Tell me if you hear me
Turn the music up

SINGIN' AND DANCIN'

turn the muic up right now!

I'M the type of GIRL who turns up the MUSIC way lOUD, just to tune out REALITY!

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I'm the type of girl who turns up the music way loud, just to tune out reality!
~Only1love4ever

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  • Rovingone gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    You remind me of my brother. He does the same thing. He could play Led Zepplin at ear splitting levels and fall asleep, because, he said, music that loud was like silence since you couldn't hear anything else. I know how you feel about music. I'm more into soft jazz, but I always have it playing in the background to sooth me. Great poem.


  • JuneHope
    May 15, 2008
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    True!

    You sound like me :] I loved the poem, it made me smile and want to crank up some music and dance!


  • one good reason
    May 7, 2008

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    I loved this it reminds me of the playfulness of rihannas songs which you included in it. We're dancing to dont stop the music this year and its alot of fun =)
    i looove your style!!
    and congrats on second!!


  • ChrissyJean
    May 6, 2008

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    Girl this is really good! After the contest is over I'd like you to add me so I can read some of your other writes! I love the quote and I'm glad you annotated it correctly! Good job and good luck!