I breathed for you,
though I knew you were dead.
Author notes
Used the option to write using only ten words.
Rating of yours: 7. Vague, but too vague. Not very open for translation.
About this poem: I had a baby, and he died in February, aged 3 1/2 months. I had to give him CPR, but I knew he was dead, completely gone.
Please tell me what you think
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I am sorry to hear about your baby boy. It does bring depth and feeling to your words. And even a tear to the eye. Again I am sorry about your loss.
Thank you for your comment and rating.
Thank you...I missed your name. But thank you nonetheless...
Now I can't read and comment on your poems.
(Which is the reason for putting your name in the AN.)
Yet I did see you put something in the summery part...I'll check it out and shut up...
At times I write too much. xD
Please never give up. -
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apname: rsheafer
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