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Emotional Storm

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The table is set, the music is playing
The candles are lit, my body is swaying,
The food is all cooked, the wine has a chill
I stand and I wait, for you are my thrill.

The night is so cold, the atmosphere warm
How static the air just prior to a storm,
Your arms round my waist as you hold me tight
You whisper sweet nothings for me tonight.

The thrill of the kiss as heavens are torn,
Ecstatic the touch as spirits are borne
To ride through the storm together as one,
Subside with a sigh and wake with the sun.

Filtering light through the curtains of lace
Kiss moistest of lips on your smiling face.

 

 

 

 

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 7

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    Ohhh very lovely and romantic, and softly sensual! Very much enjoyed this Sue!! Sigh...

  • vampirebloodlust
    May 7
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    Amazing! I love it, nice job.


  • frownsnfreckles
    May 7

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    Great the way you use to storm to emphasise the passion of the evening and the satiated desire waking to the warmth of the sun. Lovely atmosphere and imagery.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Polaja silver member
    May 6

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    Oh my... this is certainly a beautifully written poem... and the content is wonderfully created and even made me blush sensual and sweet - I love it!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Confusedboy gold member
    May 6

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    excellent feelings inside this emtional storm,as waves of feelings suround them. very moving write.


  • bluesquirrel silver member
    May 6
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    Wow!

    This really crackles- for want of a better word- got a lovely buzz to it- hot hot hot!!

  • Paula Pears
    May 6

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    I have found you from a friends homepage. I really like this, I want to learn to rhyme, but it never works for me but I love naughty poetry, this is hot and rhyming, perfect!


  • moonbumps silver member
    May 6

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    True sensual delight as always written with typical brilliance-makes me go all tinglely.
    Love Hilly xxx


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 6

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    Excellent "couplet sonnet" builds to a beautifully erotic write. On top of that it freed my muse for a write of my own.


  • arafura
    May 6

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    "The night is so cold, the atmosphere warm
    How static the air just prior to a storm..."

    Excellent... Quite sensual!


  • Peter.0 gold member
    May 6
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    good couplet quite erotic in an understated way , well actuall it is very ,, hugs xx peter


  • DLC-Jem
    May 6

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    SealedOh Sue what a great start to the day. This so tickles the senses and is full of erotic tension. Excellent write


  • Lily otv
    May 5

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    "How static the air just prior to a storm" ... this is an excellent line to describe the tension and emotions of the scene you've set. This piece has romance and a spark of electricity flowing through it. Very tastefully written

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