A paper rose made with a half used serviette
The stench of your lust dripping for another
covers it in spider webbed veins of guilt
Freshly cut you gave this to me
A double image of a fractured promise
Author notes
credit for pic to vampyourspace
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by Tattboyspet.
520 points, ended May 7, 8 entries
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Comments
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A very nice take on the image prompt. Well penned angst of heart in so few lines... Some great imagery woven within the frame. Nicely done!
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oOOo...very dark. Loved your diction choice, and that its a 'paper rose'...great write! Glad I got to read it
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taiinfinite
thankyou for your words, yes i really enjoyed this write and using paper as a medium (throw away) and it being half used already really told the story
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a good poem, good dark imagery there with the paper rose that so many tend to associate with the smiles of love
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lovely descriptive words here!!!!
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WOW! So much in such a short poem.
You choose your words carefully. Please keep writing more and I will read more of your works. GREAT!
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taiinfinite
thankyou for your kind words they give me much encouragement
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