Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Fire and Ice

Goosebumps and sweat
followed her down...
my trembling body
slowly bringing me...
to ecstasy!

In a list

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 8 of 8

  • his kiss
    July 12
    Edit | Reply
    ?????....eh?


  • Serenity-words
    July 7

    Edit | Reply
    Lovely

    This is amazing...

    Favorite lines
    "my trembling body
    slowly bringing me...
    to ecstasy! "

    Beautiful
    ~Serenity

  • Aisades
    December 14, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I like this. Concise and the first two verses were very powerful.


  • sensualbutterfly
    August 11, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Sensual. Thanks for the entry


  • B Chandler
    June 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Very unique!


  • Pollycheck
    May 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is a very well written sensual poem. it is written in good taste.

  • dillpickle62
    May 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Very Good!

    A great set of 14 word use. Best of luck with the contest.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    saucy...very passionate piece and in 14 words! Awesome, good luck

1 - 8 of 8