Politicians, lawyers,
The CIA, and agencies
Girlfriends, boyfriends
jocks and preps, it never ends!!
Where to start? Where to finish?
I hope my words don't ever diminish.
Well i tell you what
in this crooked ass town
the cops are on crack
and they're all crackin down
is it such a crime
to get a buzz from weed
at least it's all natural
cause God planted that seed.
This government is twisted,
using cigarettes as pop.(population) control
Well Fuck you all,
that's my family your takin
I'm not smokin your shit,
I'm smokin the shit i'm makin
And what about the war
Man Fuck Bush, he's a dick
leaving soldiers in Iraq
I wanna beat him with a stick.
You can't say shit
without someone getting sued
as they take all your money
and you have no fuckin food.
Man this world is bullshit
To many in a prison cell
They lied when they said this was America
Cause i know damn well
This is hell!!!
Author notes
I liked this contest and i might have to write a second poem to this theme.
A contest entry
- A Wrong World Turned Worse by MusicMattnessLives.
475 points, ended June 10, 2008, 38 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do ya think? Do you agree?
Comments
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i like it like cassie says sometimes it does seem like hell.and i get your point of view.
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Yeah you said you never heard me cuss b4 well here ya go
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lol
ok well no i did but ehh now idk what to say.lol
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This has good rhyme, it's interesting and funny and absorbing to read and I wish you good luck in the contest!
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wow. i loved this. this was intense. pure emotion and it really portrays what this world is about. i heard a dramatic interp piece (molecules) performed, and it is very similar to this. i really enjoyed reading this poem. you told me what you thought of the world and nothing more. you didn't beat around the bush. you TOLD me how this world is messed up and that's it. blunt, however effective and powerful. thanks so much for entering. best of luck and good write.
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so true
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Exactly
Rhymer, has some good thoughts to say. J/K liked it very much.
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Man i fucking love it
Man i Love it
the end I realy love
To many in a prison cell
They lied when they said this was America
Cause i know damn well
This is hell!!!
LOVED IT
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