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She is Back


She is back
with more love
than I know
how to handle

I will suffer
through it all
and try my best
not to smile
too much

and I will
always keep
my promises






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  • Whoopie!...Lotsa enthusiasm even if I don't know who the party is for...Love the write...just bustin out in love. Peace, Rhonda


  • Dalaney gold member
    May 5

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    Simply beautiful for PoetsAngel. Sometimes, less is more, and in this little poem, volumes is spoken. Love, Lane

  • You welcome me in a very warm way, I had never really gone away, just got busy with life....I missed both of you as well

    Love,
    Me xxx


  • Amera gold member
    May 5

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    I missed her too; I'm glad you wrote this, I hope it intices her to stay.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Ithica silver member
    May 5
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    Yea! A warm and very welcoming poem! Love the positive implications!!!


  • JinSays gold member
    May 5
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    Wonderful! I've no idea, but welcome back!
    Sweet write Allan, very charming.
    jin


    • Amera gold member
      May 5
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      humm... your avatar; you look just like Edna St. Vincent Millay. Do you need fashion advice as well?
  • Oh the love.......

    It would be to hard to put into words so I won't. However, I really like this poem alot. A wonderful poem. Thanks for making me think.

    Raggedee-Ann

  • I have a feeling I know who this is about!! Very joyful write!

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