my finger tips trace your every curve
just searching for your sweet pink lips!
Author notes
Dripping Temptation
A contest entry
- Erotic Hunger 14 Words by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
925 points, ended May 8, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hehe
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I loved it, it shows how much you can say and mean with such little words
Love D.L.
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hehe thank you. and yepp ur telling me
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i am prying which ones
this made my thoughts curious you are a hot piece of writing ass
i love this i think you did a good job
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hehe thank you sexy
and thanks so much 4 the bronze! its my pleasure to turn u on girl
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Ew!
Hot! In so few words. Makes the imagination remember.
Best of luck in this contest.
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hehe thank you!
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Wow!...
my fatasy is about to come true...
you're so very gracious, my love!
I love your erotica, honey.
It's so fascinatingly amazing!
Love, my dear!
Galaxy2
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thank you sweety! im glad u like it
love ya!
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Erotic
Nicely written. This is so sensual. Best of luck in this contest
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thank you, erotic is wht i aim 4 lol
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