Through the tears that seem to appear
Through cold eyes that seem so alive
I thought that you were the one that could keep me alive
But you killed my heart and left me out to die
Through the pain and the sadness
I kept myself strong
But when you denied me
It felt so wrong
I never hid anything from you
But you chose to do so much to me
That it made me impossible to breath
Through the crying and the dying
My best friends were always trying
To make me feel better about the most hardest times
One got shot from behind and the other died while driving
I still think it was my fault why they died
Through the hate and the shame
All my past relationships are to blame
One time I even got left out in the rain
But it seemed so fine cause you couldn't tell I was crying
Cause tears are so hard to tell when the rain keeps falling
All Over me, and this one time I lost all that I had to me
And through the darkness and the light
I always stayed away from the heights
And stayed in the shadows of my lost life
Where only darkness can find the true light
Cause all of this has only one common kill
To every dead heart and aching pill
That's the one thing I am trying to find still
I still can't find that one pill that will kill
And take my life away
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i like it...
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Wow this is great!
But at the beginning i felt as if you were talking about one thing and went to another until i read were you said you felt as if you lost everything.
I relate to you in this poem because i know what its like to loose everyone that ever mattered to you at all. And i know it's the most painful thing to go throug. But you should never blame yourself. And never try to take your life away.
I love this poem because it touched my heart in so many ways!
BRAVO!!
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WOW...incredible...so much pain...so much truth...so much depression!...you can really feel the emotion...gosh...this is wonderful...and I hope things get better for you...if this is true!!!!
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This is a very powerful write and the emotion behind it is conveyed very strongly.
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nice piece its like whle i was reading i seen my whole life in front of me
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