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Bottled love

Trapped in our glass world
separated from love
Just a artifact for devil himself
we sit pretty on his shelf

When we are left alone
we can smile and flirt
Our love goes strong
but our prisons is stronger

Longing for the day
when we will be free again
To fly amongst our friends

together as one

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  • trinajean
    May 11, 2008

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    aww...this was a good piece! It was sad and I really enjoyed the imagery that went along with that sadness!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    Aww... how sweet!! And a lil sad too... but joyful at the end!! Perfect for that cute pic!


    • buffsab99
      May 5, 2008
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      Thank you

      This was a cute picture. Still not sure if this is exactly what i want to say with it.