Cold steel on blue
Something so pure
Gone forever
By one quick movement
One loss of control
Slowly running me dry
Cold steel on blue
One last look
One last smile
'Cause there's no turning back
Once you've said goodbye
Author notes
picture cred to vampyourspace, i remembered it this time =]
A contest entry
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Comments
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Thank you so much for taking time to post this in my contest.
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WOW!
thats really good. as a cutter myself, i understand completely what you're talking about. short but totally to the point. i even like your title. fitting lmao..
well one thing please check the rules again because i asked everyone to put their username in AN. if you are uncomfortable with this, please at least let me know as a common courtesy.
thank you so much for entering and once again i loved this!
good luck and definitely keep writing
i keep being amazed at the quality of these entries i'm receiving!
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haha thank you
sorry about the username thing, must have missd it ^^
well its thearmsofsorrow anyway
sorry
thanks
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When I started reading it it seemed that you had got the idea that I got from the image, but as I continued it seemed to point in the direction that I'm sure many will see
I did enjoy the repetition of the cold steel on blue though - it worked well in this piece
thank you for your entry
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