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The Broken Heart






An intelligent mind hides
A delicate heart
One who breaks easily
But is hidden by a smile

All day she appears happy
To quash concern

But if you look
Look deep into here eyes
You can see
Her broken heart
And her battered soul

Until the sun goes down
And the heart can feel
Safely at home

Where she needs not pretend
To be strong
The heart can break
Tucked under the covers

Late at night
The delicate heart
Thinks she just might
Cry a little tonight

As the sun rises in the morn
She smiles to greet the dawn

A smile she will smile while she is not alone.

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  • Another Beauty

    I love this alot . your poetic style i so encouraging Mum and it is just magical and wonderfully penned poetry at heart the mor eoften you write,. any ways enjoy the depth quality and beauty through out this poem. keep up the good work


  • Amera gold member
    May 5

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    You have done a wonderful job of composing heartbreak and sadness. You have the heart of a poet and I love it!

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Myra says: "Welcome to the tear-filled home of sorrowful joy." The truth is that the universe is utterly impersonal. It does not care one bit if the wheels come off and we crash. That is why we have one another; to compensate and make up for that. YAY!


  • Dreamana
    May 5

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    This reminds me of someone that I love, as fragile as a sparrow but will appear as brave as a dragon until alone. Lovely write which stirred up emotions.

    If u get a mo, please review one of mine.

  • Lonely Ecouraging And I Like It!

    You made me sad, too but I smiled at the end. Keep smiling! And KEEP WRITING!!

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