Blink;
because I feel like tuning you out.
I heard your laughter from yards away
and ran when my palms began to itch.
You're an allergy that seems to affect
the way my stomach holds together.
It took a moment of lacing
before I could stand straight...
And I still can't get the slits out of my lips
from the way I bit your heart out.
I bet you wouldn't know;
that I vomited up my memories
in a corner of those walls.
No, you wouldn't know;
because that kind of drama
is your sorta cadence.
So you would lead yourself to believe.
Sometimes, when I can't sleep--
I imagine the way you would scream
if I finger-fucked your insides.
Maybe I'd press a revolver to my chest;
and let you choose my death
while I scratch
you thin.
Author notes
I swear.
I'm going to get out of this 1st person state of writing soon.
I can't stand it.
I'm an abstract writer.
Soon enough; I'll get back to it.
Please tell me what you think
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what's wrong with 1st person?
the only problem i have with it is when people assume that you're writing about yourself when using 1st person.
moving on:
And I still can't get the slits out of my lips
from the way I bit your heart out. <--for me: best part
also; the last bit was good. they both have that kind of catch that makes you want to take it seriously and really focus. 13478374230 thumbs up, dahling <3
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this gave me chills. as soon as your said "finger fuck" i was like *takes this poem seriously*
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You's amazin'
I swear to god if david swoops in and makes some comment about how one stanza compliments another or some other garbage
I will destroy him.
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Fuck. I meant destroy.
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DESTORYYYY.
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"DESTORY" I pronounce it like "DE STORY" like arnold is going to read me a bed time fairy tale.
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That was the best mental image I've had in a long time.
I was pronouncing it... DE-STORY... like, THE ANTI STORY.
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your such a moron. this is amazing. i like it, despite everything thats going on. nostalgia for the old days, joo know?
anyways, righty good spot of lit, my wobbles.
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What? Do you even have any idea what I write about?
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