Shadows dancing.
Shades of aqua paint our impassioned bonding
smooth hands glide over my glistening skin
as button by button, I reveal your body.
In this, secluded spot take your time
teasing every inch of me,
giving life to all my desires.
Embraced, loving me, moving together we connect.
our shadows fervently dance,
we hold tight, reach peaks and fall into one another
with satisfied sighs in this candle-lit cave.
Author notes
Here is the origanal..I always feel it's appropriate if posting a revision to give the reader the origanal, so as to compare fairly etc etc.
Shadows Dancing.
Shades of aqua
paint
our
impassioned bareness.
Embraced,
loving me, we connect.
Shadows dance
fervently together
in this
candle-lit cave.
Anyway, sorry I don't have new new write but your contest did get me thinking, movement on growing that was, time was now lol
Hope you enjoy regardless Azlyn and again, love the pic of Jim
In a list
A contest entry
- Quivering...Shivering...Warm Sweet Passion*** by SummerlandRayne.
313 points, ended May 5, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very sensual, Very seducing ,and it's the best way that erotica should be done in good taste.
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Wonderful
So much fun. Very nice sensual write done in such wonderful taste. I think you did a fabulous job on this one. I love your sensual poems. So gifted you are.
Much Love
Your Aunty
Kelle Marie
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Kinda puts you in the mood if you know what I mean LOL
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Alwys wonderful taste with me...well maybe always lol
Oh yes I do know what u mean..
Love U auny..
Cin
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taiinfinite
a cocoon filled with your symphony of wanted love very very silken
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wow what a poetic comment, I love it Thank you
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I really enjoyed this, well written and very smooth. A great piece indeed, keep up the good work.
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Thank you for your lovely comment
Cindy
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I did enjoy!!! Jim is a pleasure to be certain!!!
Thanks Hun!!!
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my pleasure
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Really well written, Cindy. For, that second stanza can't be beat. It is a gem in and of itself. Just incredible. A joy to read, as always, and I wish you the very best of luck in the contest!
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Thank you Mark..I am definetly pleased with the revision
must have been the night at resort with Matt that got me wanting to do it
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So delicious Cindy, well done, and best of luck in the contest!
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Thanx Dad
Hope your staying well
Cin
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You're sinfully delicious indeed...
allowing smooth hands gliding on your glistening skin
revealing your amazing body...button by button...
choosing a secluded spot for the love play
enjoying to be teased ...
offering every inch of your voluptuous body...a full meal...
giving life to your every lustful desire
embracing
moving together in a love-making process
holding tight
reaching peaks of sexual delight
falling into your love-maker
with satisfied sighs in a candle-lit cave.
Oh my...you're really sinful...
really lustful
really tasty
really delicious!
I love you for everything you write and you do...
Kisses....lots of kisses...all over, honey!
Galaxy2
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Thank you so so so much.
What a great comment, I love to see a fan of erotica
I have many in the collection, I hope you find and enjoy some more if you want
Cindy
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Damn girl, and here I am thinking of donning the flannelette and the fluffy slippers
Love, C
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hehehehehe
Cin
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Jim Morrison and softly sensual words...they go so well together sweetheart. Both your original words and the revision are wonderful.
Best of luck in the contest.
Love Mum 
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jim morrison and no words, would be fine with me lol
Thanx Mum, enjoyed revisiting, always thinking it was to short..but that was the origanal contest I wrote it for too.
Cin
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