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Reasons

Reprimanding visions
Enveloping me into
Another dimension -
Somewhere unknown,
Over the rainbow, &
Nudging me into
Safe enclosures.

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  • Ebbing.X.Discreetly
    August 18, 2008

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    Wow, this is simply perfect...It's so awesome because you managed to write so much in such short length! keep on writing! this is beautifully written!!


  • aslanlight
    May 13, 2008

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    Wow the first three lines sound like Hypocrisy lyrics (told you I'm obsessed!). I LOVE THIS!!! I could've written it myself, that's how good it is! Heheheheh
    It's just.....WOW!!!! It'd be up for a gold in one of my contests, put it that way.

    Georgia


    • Girl With Guitar silver member
      May 17, 2008
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      Hah, up yourself much? Kidding. But thank you! And I did'nt even know if this made 100% sense lol. Glad you like!


  • Bleeding On Paper
    May 6, 2008
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    i like this

  • LOL

    I donno what my sis was thinking but any ways this was quite an interesting write. I kinda like it when you write confussing stuff thats random becaus eit makes sense & its also sometimes good haha. any ways nice little write unusual but good keep up the good work *hugggles*

    • Girl With Guitar silver member
      May 6, 2008
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      Sometimes good? Oi. I'm always good. And thank you for comment, it's a little random and confusing but that's me so go figure. Cheers!


  • Ravenblood
    May 5, 2008

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    I don't ... really ... know ... either..

    But I love you, and its interesting, I shall have to read it a few more times and get back to you.

    Shall text you tomorrow or something, luffles you.

    Muahs

    Claire-Anne

    • Girl With Guitar silver member
      May 6, 2008
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      Lol I texting you know. & I love you too. Wrote this during Business Management. Bored and have too many things in my head. Not smart things unfortunately lol.
      Luff you deary

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