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The blue skies are calling me to their white mountain tops.

The mountain tops are where the angels play.. 

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I love to sit and look at the sky and all its glory.

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  • ksenia juggalette
    May 18, 2008
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    its pretty i like it


  • Unsigned gold member
    May 6, 2008
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    Beautiful Images


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  • Sprite silver member
    May 5, 2008
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    This brought on a rush of images of angels frolicking in the clouds covering the peaks. A pretty bit of imagery. Made me smile to myself.

    The second line starts a new sentence, doesn't it? Just noticed no caps there.

    I have never thought about whether angels play. A new concept for me to consider. I like the idea.

    ~ Joyce


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 5, 2008

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    sounds nice.... good luck in contest... i like....... thank you for sharing with us...............!!!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 5, 2008

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    I love the thoughts you have penned here as they have such a serene aura about them. If I might make just a few minor suggestions. You have some spelling errors that you may wish to clear up when you get a free moment. For instance:

    blue mountain SKIES call me
    to THEIR white mountain tops
    the mountain tops are WHERE
    the angels love to play

    Just a suggestion! You have a delightful poem. Best wishes to you in all of your endeavors and thanks for sharing this with me. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet.
    ♥ Touchof1der

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