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I want..





I want, dream, dressing..
in devouring you, in pieces,
all your taste, tenuous line,
between concrete and,
the abstract thing.

To be, wish, transformed,
done, prohibited result,
pure sin, getting wet in rivers
wait of your swim, fury..
my projected dream,
I want you!

Comes to punish, put on in boldness
soul controls in way, I deserve
to wish you to taste,
when your tongue flows,
in this pleasure that I lack.







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  • whispernthedark silver member
    May 20

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    This is a great interpretation of the picture. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 8
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    Very smooth to read, flows so well. An interesting take on the picture, I love it. Good luck

  • CinfullyDelicious
    May 5

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    Ohhh wow an enticing read, flowed so smoothly, loved the word choice

    Hope you do well in the contest



    Cindy