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Sail Away


Warm winds blow across
emerald green seas
Solo at the helm
I’m sailing in the breeze
Beneath clear blue skies








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  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    Nicely done...wonderful metaphor and flow...made one feel comfortable in the oneness of this journey in life...well written and read...Best to you!

  • celadia
    May 5, 2008
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    A good sailing poem, real short, real sweet.