It shows deep in your eyes and I linger on our first kiss
I was a country girl in the city, unknowingly waiting your rescue.
Come,
break the walls I have set strong.
You took hold telling me it would all work out fine.
I let you have my heart
now…
Even if you're walking away and it is tearing me in two.
Even if the end really was here
still wouldn’t give up the fight, could not ever let you go.
walk away from all of this, our love.
You won the highest place in my heart.
It breaks me, thoughts of rising to even one new day alone.
Smelling your pillow, hands run over the empty space aside me
please do not disappear on me my sweet.
Even if you're walking away and it is tearing me in two.
Even if the end really was here
still wouldn’t give up the fight, could not ever let you go.
walk away from all of this, our love.
How could I shut you out?
Shut out our love and everything you gave me.
I will never understand why fate has to be cruel to be kind,
however, I wont give in.
Stay strong with honesty no matter
what we take on board, will you stay too ‘cause
even if you're walking away and it is tearing me in two.
Even if the end really was here
still wouldn’t give up the fight, could not ever let you go.
walk away from all of this, our love.
Author notes
this is written and inspired from the song lyrics of this love by the veronicas..a song I am i love with right now lol
The Veronicas - This Love Lyrics
I, I,
I can see it in your eyes
Taste it in our first kiss
Stranger in this lonely town (this lonely town)
Save me from my emptiness (save me)
You took my hand
You told me it would be ok
I trusted you to hold my heart
Now fate is pulling me away,
from you
Even if I leave you now
And it breaks my heart
Even if I'm not around
I won't give in
I can't give up
On this love
You've become a piece of me
Makes me sick to even think
Of mornings waking up alone
Searching for you in my sheets
Don't fade, away
Even if I leave you now
And it breaks my heart
Even if I'm not around
I won't give in (won't give in)
I can't give up (can't give up)
On this love
I can't just close the door
(on this love)
I never felt anything like this before
(like this love)
Tell me the truth no matter what we're going through
Will you hold on too 'cause
Even if I leave you now
And it breaks my heart
Even if I'm not around
I won't give in
I can't give up
On this love..
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I love this and I could relate to it in a BIG way. I'm glad I read this.
***Pam***
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Super beautiful. It could easily be turned into a song of it's own. I've been in Florida for a week, otherwise I would have already commented this, saying a few witty things about how you rock and if you weren't a girl I would so want to marry you....Lol. Jk. But since I wasn't here, I won't say those things so just ignore the last few sentences I typed. Lol. You're awesome and thanks for entering the contest!!!
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This is pretty good. It gives a feeling of sadness.
But it also makes you feel strong because you aren't giving up. It sort of reminds me of a Paramore song "Miracle." My favorite part is:
"Even if you're walking away and it is tearing me in two.
Even if the end really was here
still wouldn’t give up the fight, could not ever let you go.
walk away from all of this, our love."
Astonishing.
Thank you for entering our contest.
-La Tua Cantante
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If only people would hold on and not give up on love without a fight there wouldn't be so many divorces. Beautiful words of hope and love.
Favorite part:
"You won the highest place in my heart."
"It breaks me, thoughts of rising to even one new day alone."
Wonderful and good-luck in the contest!!
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Thank you..love the song and my love of course..and certainly hope we aren't a divorce statistic...I would work through anything with him, for that no never be the case
Cindy
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This is really well written and I read the lyrics and I think your words were perfectly inspired by them.
just one thing "Even if your walking away" I think it should be you're =) thanks for entering the contest. -
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Thank you
and omg im so bad, your so right..lol..Will change over now, thank you for pointing out
Cindy
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I love this honey, it's gorgeous. I can just hear Jess and Lisa singing it now
You did a truly wonderful job.
Love Mum 
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hehehehehe, thanx Mum
lov u
Cin
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Well now I know this one is from fantasy because I know how much you adore your partner lol but it is beautifully done to the prompt song. Love, C
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Indeed.mostly just from the song, not real life.
definetly adoring him
Thanks Darl
Cin
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