Puckish Prattles
dittles and dattles
and dobbles outside all day
no homework no school
no parents no rule
so all she does is play
come hither come tither
scamper fither and dither
she bounces like a sunray
dreams of sugary bubbles
and cradles and cuddles
keep her fears at bay
jumps in puddles and muddles
chases after bubbles and wubbles
she frolics her cares away
so she wanders and launders
and jaunders and ponders
things she sees along the way
questions ittles and bittles
and muttles and nuttles
then stops to pick a bouquet
of the wild cherry and rosemary
and the peony and daphne
that bloom in the month of May
this nonsensical child
who runs around wild
must run on air, I daresay.
Author notes
ap name: sailor ptolema
This is a silly poem I wrote for my darling twin cousins who are pictured!
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- For those with no trophies... by islekine.
600 points, ended May 11, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rhyme and Flow part 2 Children's - 50,000 points series by cricketjeff.
4000 points, ended June 3, 49 entries
Honorable winner
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390 points, ended July 7, 68 entries
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Comments
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cute picture and really cute poem thanks for entering.
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This is superb and one from a new winner to us, it is a special pleasure to give prizes to new people please keep entering and we'll see if we can get you a different colour next time.
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This is superb and one from a new winner to us, it is a special pleasure to give prizes to new people please keep entering and we'll see if we can get you a different colour next time.
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You are certainly verse-atile
This is funny and cute to match the picture.
I like it and hope you do well in the contest.
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thanks!
Ditto for you too!
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Lovely worded piece the kind children would understand and love Great work good luck in the contest
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thank you very much!!
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this is great. It gave me a wonderful story-time feeling and has a really happy feel. thank you for entering.
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Aloha!
with the riddles and fiddles
and cittles and mittles
with them at her side
the excitement never ends.
this stanza is a bit akward...perhaps..close by her side...the two "with"s are redundant...
Also your capping of lines is off and on....
All in all a darling write! Kids are a wonderful inspiration! Thanks for entering..
Write on!
*PEACE*
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hi! i submitted my edited version...i think its a tad more cohesive....
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Aloha!
I forgot to ask for username...so I can check your profile.....thanks!
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