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the river that flooded my past



The susquehanna monster
crept from his lair
to visit the night that it rained

but nobody woke up

so he swept them all away
to where the endless river roams

but nobody woke up

so he dried up
then went away
but took everybody with him.






 

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all of them... dead

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  • Barry Hodges
    March 22, 2009

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    This susquehanna animal is a creature I have not hitherto encountered, but mayhap I shall do this one fine day as Puccini said.


  • XScreamMeALoveSongx
    May 7, 2008
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    wow

    this is a really good poem..
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