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~ Would You ~ { Gold }

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Touch me

with the steam that heats the elements of lust,

Kiss me

like no other that lights the passions robe,

Hold me

as we dance within the spray that cleanses our frame,

Lighten me

with a smile that says you love me,

Caress me

to the oils that massage our softened skins,

Shower me,

with devotion and the ecstasy of desire,

Entice me

arousing upon our sensual needs.

 

 

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  • A63-Angel
    September 30
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    beautiful! loved this


  • princess Jewelcat22 gold member
    September 24
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    I love the way you wrote this!!! Your words are soft sweet and tender!!! They are very coaxing!!! The picture is an excellent fit!! I LOVE IT!!

  • Galaxy2
    June 22

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    I'd love to touch you, honey, that would increase your level of lust
    I'd shower erotic kisses on you that might not have touched your limbs before
    I'd hold you so close to me that I'd feel the throbbing sound of your heart
    I'd lighten you with a smile to show how happy I feel when you're close by
    I'd give a body massage and caress your soft limbs with those of mine
    I'd take you to the realm of ecstasy...
    make you dream, and fantasize...
    you'd watch and feel nothing but waterfalls, streams, butterflies, flowers and rainbows
    and I'd entice you and arouse your sensual desires as we lie skin to skin, my love!

    It's a wonderful poem, my dear!
    Kisses...all over you!

    Galaxy2


  • mistiman
    May 14

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    I think this is one of your best sensual writes, it is dripping with imagined lust and as steamy as the hottest shower ... loved reading it ... thank you Snakewoman

  • Dark Otter gold member
    May 12

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    Well done!

    It even has a gold thingamajiggy next to it. You play nicely inside its form. Erotic and sensual is a lovely combination. Thanks for the read.


  • imahealer gold member
    May 12

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    Julie, JUst had to read one of your latest poems. Congratulations on the gold. This is so sensual, yet very sophisticated. Not alt all x-rated, but says what the eye doesn't see, Loved the form you used to enhance the following sentence.

    Shana


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      May 12
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      Thank you sweetheart
      Loved the choice of image and the words flowed as did the shower
      Love you xx

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    May 5

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    oh dear.. this was a very romantic yet sensual write.. I truly loved this take on the prompt! You heated things up yet made tender moments as well.. beautifully done.. best of luck..

    Angel

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 5

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    This is really stunning you know. I got lost in this. An amazing piece of writing that has GOLD written all over it. Well done Julie.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    xx


  • daviscth silver member
    May 5

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    I love the imagery in this beautifully done sensual poem sis. Yipee for romance. LOL. Good luck in the contest.


  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    May 5
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    very sensuous

    even a sense of romance mingles with this sensual poem od stirring allure , nicely penned


  • Jonathan Wikkins
    May 5

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    anytime sweetie, anytime! you're definately putting forth a hot one here!

    good luck in the contest!

    mike, aka jonathan wikkins

  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 5

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    Wow saucy indeed A well captured piece of passion. Good luck in the contest

  • Carolina Moon silver member
    May 5

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    You, my dear have captured their steamy moment well wow

    Linda


  • unsigned gold member
    May 5

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    Yes I would but the question is would you...lol

    Lovely write Sis...your man is a lucky one and her doesn't even know it !!!

    S


  • midnite wolf silver member
    May 5

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    great write, certainly sensual, never been able to write things like this but will keep working on it, great write hun,

  • Nighttime angel
    May 5

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    Mum yes this is sensual, why the doubt? I love this one a lot. seems I've lost the ability to write this stuff once again. maybe its a mind thing.. working on something though.. excellent take on the prompt. I love this poem

    good luck

    kat

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