as shooting stars
flower sparkling shards
across the magic of night
the moons music motions
as it cushions comforting clouds
upon this celestial sight
so sleep peaceful dreams
until the sunshine princess
warm under this blanket of bright
Author notes
For Genna....
Pic Credit: rafaelkwe@photobucket.com
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In the last line, did you mean to say "warms"? ("until the sunshine princess warms under the blanket of bright") I just ask, because the flow seemed to break a bit there ..
This is a lovely lullaby, I like the use of alliteration - enough to add interest, but not too much, which would turn it into a tongue twister! Thank you for the entry! -
Awww this is so sweet and beautifully written Rob. Delighrful and I bet Genna loved it
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full of charm like the moonlight and warm like the sunshine...beautiful ...
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Oh Poppa I like your poem thank you very much Sir it is beautiful I hope that you ahve a nice night thank you very much
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This is so beautifully penned Rob! So sweet and endearing,, this surely will touch the heart of this very sweet poet!
Just lovely!!
All my best to you in the contest!
Linda
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This is just beautiful she will love this you are very kind to do this poem for her hope that you are having a great day much love
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Peaceful...precious...beautiful!
Love that pic!!!
Blessing to read your lovely words and thoughts!
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awwww this is sooo sweet *hugs* im sure she will like it,
glad you entered
take care
stephanie
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Peaceful dreams...we all should have..beautiful words darl
Good luck in the contest
Cin
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Aww this is just so precious and gorgeous!!! A beautiful lullaby that would warm and lift any heart! She will adore this!
It's just magical hun!!!
*wants to cry is so beautiful*
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Very comforting poem. Good work.
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