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Losing myself to you.......

Resurrect the ghosts,
Wispy remains of thyself........
reliving those eves of frost,
as i dust cobwebs from my soul's shelf......

Eyes meander through that bough,
Memories,courtesy you.........
Satiating me now,
reminsces of our love, so true.......

Descending into that treacherous vortex,
Typhoons of grief swamping me away.......
Enveloping me like livid snakes,
Those yonder clouds, ominously grey......

Losing myself to obscurity,
Snuffing away all hopes......
god forsake your clammy solidarity,
as my resilience shatters and nothingness gropes.......

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  • Lagrimas
    May 5, 2008
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    Nice, I enjoyed the read. Good Luck in the contest!


  • Jarhead82
    May 5, 2008
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    Love the style of this. Good, thought provoking writing.