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Murmurs

Missing image

Disembodied voices

rolling through brain,

apocalypse message

shudder spine,

images come that burn

insides with fear.

 

Will grips chair's arms

with white knuckle defiance,

heart races from dread

of impending devastation.

 

Soliloquy of lament

pours forth from angst

drenched soul,

murmurs becoming prayers

for  intervention's miracle.

 

One surrenders to fate's visions,

remembering bewitching face

belonging to sprite form

as author of impending upheaval.

 

Accepting destiny

and ensuing consequences,

embracing the onslaught

unto one's future

where divine messenger

brings broken spirits healing

that see misery as treasure

and power to destroy its fake gold

as curse instead of blessing.

Author notes

picture is by elisafox (on flickr)

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  • This is a wonderful story inspired by the picture. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


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  • JinSays gold member
    May 5

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    Accepting destiny
    and ensuing consequences,
    embracing the onslaught
    unto one's future
    where divine messenger
    brings broken spirits healing
    that see misery as treasure
    and power to destroy its fake gold
    as curse instead of blessing.

    WOW.
    That's all I can summon.
    fanfreakintastic!
    Jin

  • this is gr8t your poetry flows prefect it goes well with the pitcher

  • excellent~

    I can't believe you haven't got any reviews on this until now...
    Yeah Your little sis is first to comment
    As always perfect lil brother
    You have evoked some powerful messages in this poem...
    The last stanza really got me...
    Accepting destiny
    and ensuing consequences
    embracing the onslaught
    unto one's future
    where divine messenger
    brings broken spirits healing
    that sees misery as treasure
    and power to destroy it's fake gold
    as curse instead of blessing~
    As always as my sis Desire say:
    I am whoohoooooo on this one dear brother...
    It's a winner in my book...
    Deep,thought provoking and full of rich imagery
    Need I say more from the prompt of the Pic?
    Best of luck in the contest...
    It's a winner in my book
    Love ya lil brother
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~