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Whizz





Accomplice of senses,
caressing inebriant pleasure,
imprison in spring dunes,
a heart, to leisure,
whizz silent confession
in misty mysterious.



















 

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 6, 2008

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    misty mysterious.....hmmm I like that a lot..short but sweet well written piece :D:D *hug* Cindy


  • divebar
    May 5, 2008
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    nice use of alliteration