True beauty shone eloquently,
below star filled skies.
Elation was evident, as I gazed
into tear filled eyes.
The windows of our hearts lay open
to each others love.
Wrapped within passion's embrace,
lit in light, by the moon above.
Author notes
40 words
Artist:LonelyPierot
A contest entry
- Paying It Forward.... {{Image Inspired}} by PerfectImperfection.
650 points, ended May 9, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good grief, I am going to soon stop reading your pieces *smile*s
wonderful job
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Mmmm the emotion of deep love...beautifully expressed.
A wonderful write.
Congrats on the Bronze.
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Glad to see a trophy here. Truly well deserved.
~Pamela 
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A very beautiful and well flowing take on the prompt here. Nicely done! Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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Such a beautiful poem this is...
"The windows of our hearts lay open
to each others love."
Amazing write filled with lovely imagery and beautiful language...
Best wishes!
Lynda
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sooooooooooo romantic and sweet...passionate and lovely ...a wowzers for me best to you in the contest! blessings always~ Trisha
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This is so romantic and sweet.
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Sigh... this was such a beauty sweetie.
LOVE THIS... Such romantic visions this gave.
Best of luck in the contest.
Love,
Delila
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awesome hun xxx superb in every thought and profound passion exudes in every line from your heart. well done and many loving blessings always xxxx
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The metre in this poem is outstanding! Love the way the words compliment the picture and vice versa. Some of the lines I would really like to remember because they are so beautiful!
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A tender piece to this image. Soft, caring and filled with heart. Good luck in the contest. ~Pamela
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A beautiful 40 words for sure. They go so well with the equally beautiful picture. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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