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Over me

Darkness sinking in dispair
Falling down without a care
Reaching up to one who sees
Jesus our Lord who holds the key

I stretch out my hand
He is waiting there
He lets me know I have no cares

For he is watching over me
Just as you just watch and see

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 5, 2008
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    well done. i liked the flow and rhyme scheme. plus, you conveyed the truth so well. nicely penned.

  • Warrior7
    May 5, 2008

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    Hello and welcome to Allpoetry,
    Having faith keeps us strong, your poem is simple and straight to the point which makes a good read.

    If you have any questions please feel free to ask me or any of the other greeters.