Fall grass turns white
Day fades to night
The sun no longer visible
All alone
She comes to still your heart
And freeze your soul
On wings of cold
In fits of rage
She takes all life away
The ruins of the world
~ Within Temptation: Ice Queen ~
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Yes Thats An Ice Queen Alright
Such a sad deep write here. You did an excellent job on this poem of a broken heart. You are a very talented writer. It hurt my heart just to read it. I felt sorry for you if this is true. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
stavykm


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I really like this one

Id poin out some favoite parts, but copy&pasting the whole poem to this box 3 inches below it seems redundant to meXD

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nice....very nice



