brushing off their lives
from my shoulders, I am left
remembering you
Author notes
This sort of came to me when I was walking through a currently abandoned boardwalk, hitting spiderweb after spiderweb. I couldn't help but think of their kingdoms I had destroyed by brushing them off.
A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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cocolocoblondie
Nice one very well done Congrats on the bronze
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great phrase - brushing off their lives. I like the image created, after wiping it all away, you only have memories.
Congratulations on the bronze.
Marlene -
first rate!
...I liked the thought in your notes almost as much as your poem!
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