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Mr. Sorrow

Eyes so full of life,
seemed to die on my sight.
The pain soo deep,
you laughed to see,
my heart corrupt.

And in your soul,
a dark entity.
Willing to cause pain,
no care for shame.
A hypocrite of "your ways".

Your laugh was bitter,
your grin fake.
Never for others sake,
but for your own selfish ways.

And now to forget,
the monster you were.
It's no choice,
nor no way.
Too many months,
too many days.
It's a sin to think that way.

To me,
you'll always be the monster in the shadows.
And to you,
I'll always be the girl who got away.

{For the man I never want to see again}

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I don't know if this fits in the contest. I really hate the guy this poem is about, that's why I entered it. But if it wasn't what you had in mind I'll respectively remove it.

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  • Lagrimas
    May 5, 2008
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    Exactly

    Oh thank you, I'm glad to see I'm not the only one.