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Blue Eyes

I watch you with wary eyes,
for a sign, any sign,
of what you are thinking.

You walk by without a thought,
never once glancing my way.
Those blue eyes never look at me,
but mine never leave you.

The longing is too much,
how can you sit there and not feel it,
my arm brushes yours,
I will myself not to do it again.

My heart pounds so hard
when you come near,
my stomach flys upside down
when you talk to me.

But what do you see in those clear eyes?
I wish I knew what you were thinking,
so I could stop wondering.

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  • onapedestalIstand
    May 6, 2008
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    this is a really sweet write thanks for entering...sarah