oh dear God my best friend,
hear my voice now as always.
in all the sins i have committed,
i ask for your forgiveness.
praises and thanks for You,
in all the blessing You showered upon us.
for all the prayers You have granted,
million thanks are not enough to offer You.
now i bow and kneel in front of you,
with teary eyes and a calm soul.
Lord i ask for Your help,
in the trials that i am going through.
i am strong for You are there,
You make me strong whenever i am weak.
and every prayers i offer to you,
You are always there to grant them and help me.
with faith saying that You're near,
everything would be beautiful as it can be.
for there are reasons why things are happening,
everything has a purpose and that's for real, Amen.
Author notes
Lord i thank you for everything. I may encounter trials, but You are there to help me. I may commit sins everyday, but You are still there to grant my prayers. That's why I offer to You my life and soul. I am all Yours and my faith to You i give.
A contest entry
- Allpoetry's Prayer Contest: May by Over and Done.
600 points, ended June 8, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - a prayer... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended May 15, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Christian Prayer Contest by Angels Delight.
600 points, ended May 26, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #75 Short Prayers by daviscth.
300 points, ended May 28, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Allpoetry Prayer Contest - June by Over and Done.
600 points, ended July 4, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Just listen. by birdlove.
300 points, ended June 22, 2008, 17 entries
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WOW!!!!very clear and heartfelt.Thanks for sharin
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You make me wish I was more religious, but I just can't get into it: going to church, the ten commandments, spreading the good news. I did, however, like the poem. Good job.
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Though the words within the poem and the overall impression are great I think perhaps people are being too casual about this piece which to me could do with work on a basic English level.
I.E. Capitilisation would make it look much better.
These are only my own personal impressions feel free to delete and disregard me.
As for the contest (come up and see me) It is about the seasons of the earth (summer spring etc. so i do not feel it really fits in this catagory sorry. -
I like your humility before the Lord in prayer. Very heartfelt.
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What a beautiful prayer, thanks so much for posting it in my contest. I loved the title you gave it.
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Yes the sentiments of the surrendering to God is the only place to get the releif from HIM..thank you so much for inspiring us too..
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very nicely writting..it sounds as if just about everyone and anyone could be saying this prayer..
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very nice and very lovely it really shows that you want the lord to stay in your life. It is very good. keep it up.
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Lovely sentiments.
It is always nice to start the day off with a prayer. And this is one that is sincerely written. I think that we all have those moments when we just have to sit down and reflect and pray on the matters that concern us.
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Very nice, you might want to look at the 2nd stance when you say million thanks for You are not enough. I think you meant for they are not enough.
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thanks for your comments.. very well appreciated.. ^_^
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