Today is a special day Master and i'm spending with You.
You say You have something special planned for me too.
Yes a special spanking to the count of fiftytwo.
With the strap, a paddle or a cane or two.
Fiftytwo Sir i say, but i'm only fiftyone.
Yes my slave you're fiftyone with one to grow on.
Oh! Master, i feel so special today.
You are very special everyday.
But this is a special day, it is your
BIRTHDAY
"Happy Birthday My Slave"
Author notes
May 7th is my birthday and i will spending it with my One. *smiles*
Dear Amanda
I wrote this to tell you how special I feel that my birthday is coming up soon.
Not capitalizing the i's is done on purpose just so you know. That is to show honor to my One.
A contest entry
- TITLES!!! by AutumnsFlame.
1142 points, ended June 5, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is your first empression?
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I like how you related this title to your own life.... I think your rhyme was kinda forced in a few places, but overall this is an alright poem. Thank you for entering my contest!
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Thank you for your comment and I enjoyed being in your contest. I am still new at writing and still learning.
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you are specil crafty
... Happy birfday for May 7 ... its my Hubby birfday today 5th he is 53 lol and on the 7th We have been married 26 years so yea May 7th is a Specil day for Special people 
.. enjoy your birfday spanking n good luck in the contest xxx huggles cheeky xxx
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Thank you cheeky and Happy Birthday to your Hubby from me please. Wow your Anniversary on my Birthday too..it is a special day..Happy Anniversary to you both...special huggles to you and the hubby,
huggles ya my special friend,
crafty
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