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[ This sinking feeling I hold in my heart ]

This sinking feeling I hold in my heart
I don't know how it came to be nor why it is...
But I don't know how to relinquish it...


Thoughts form as days go by
Why is this here with me?
I ask myself, but I do not receive an answer


Nothing seems to destroy the invasion in me
I try one thing to another that I can think of
Still nothing works.


I lose myself in the shadows
Deaf to my surroundings, blind from my eyes
Is there anyway of escaping insanity?


Then I stop myself from sudden movement/thoughts
A warm flows through the air gently but swiftly
I follow the warmth to its source....Ally.

Author notes

Something I had to write...basically about what I realize during times of dark over light
I love you, Ally.

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  • Nickey Mouse
    May 5, 2008

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    How do you come up with this stuff? This all comes natural to you.Gosh it takes me ove ran hour to write a poem and it t akes you what five minutes?
    Anyway though It was nice.