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Oh Lady, beware.

Lady don't you see?
The Evil lurks behind you.
You can pretend not to see,
but it's standing right beside you.
A veiled threat behind your eyes,
scratching behind closed doors.
And still you pretend not to realize
what a threat has anchored on your shores
Oh Lady please, ignore me no more,
For someday it will destroy you.

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Ok, so maybe it's not my best poem...

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    Love the way you went with this poem
    Dark thoughts, I see it as a shadow the inner and outer self
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    I like it, a very chilling piece, and excellent take on the prompt. All the best in the contest with it